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Evaluators:
 Min Kwon
Young
Wang
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Untitled Work
Artwork by Ghost Chen-Chen
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Personal website: http://come.to/edwardj
Specialty in Art: Unspecified
Specialty in Medium: Computer Graphics
Self-estimated level: beginner
Artist's Comments: I dunno, just critique this. Whatever you see that's bad/don't like.
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Min Kwon Says:
Goi, I love your coloring job on this one. It's exactly one of
the few styles I'm digging currently. You might want to take
a look at artworks from this Japanese site called Fragile because I see
a lot of similarities between the style shown in your particular
artwork and the works from this site. Even the pic atmosphere,
too. ^^ Anyways, things to point out... The girl's face is seen
from the side, and the boy is seen from 80% front. Yet there
is no difference between the way their eyes are seen/drawn.
When a face is seen from the side, the eye should look smaller
horizontally, and the pupils should also look "thinner." The boy's
pose is alright overall, but his head seems to be detached from
his body (^^;;;;;). Perhaps you drew his neck a little too long?
Although you can only see a normal sized neck in the pic, you
need to think about the unseen part of his neck, covered by his
head/face in the pose. And for a itty bitty tip, if you want
something that is REALLY shiny, go for this rather than this.
Congrats on the good job! Wove your art ^^
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Young Wang Says: Not bad.. I like the shading. I'm not sure what's in the
background.. if those are clouds, they look awfully a lot like mercury =}
On the picture in the corner, I think the eye looks sorta elongated..
so it makes her eye look awfully disproportionate. I can't seem to come
up with many critiques for this pic.. it's all in all very good. It
reminds me of Wild Arms, the opening credits.
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