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REFF Critiquers:
Juno
Kim
Arion
McBride
Maggie
Bradshaw
Lorelai
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Xenogears Fanart: Fei Fong Wong
Artwork by gnd
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Personal website: http://www.geocities.com/hadibi
Specialty in Art: People
Specialty in Medium: CG
Self-estimated level: Intermediate
Artist's Comments: Hmm, I think i made his nose too long,
doncha think? ^^;;;
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Juno
Says: Wooooooow~ O_o! That is some VERY classy Xenogears fanart! You
have such great control with your tablet (I tried it once, didn't get
it at all O.o) You do hair beautifully¡¦ I love how the front bang came
out, and the eye (soooo cool XD!) As for the skin, adding the pink to
the lips, cheek, and nose makes it look more realistic, and using dark
brown-reds for the darker parts of the skin was well done. Techniques
on coloring skin always varies with the artist's particular style and
preference. It all just depends on you. ^^ Lessee, the head is a bit narrow,
remember that the top part of the skull is round, almost spherical. Fei¡¯s
forehead and neck came out nice, but the back of the head needs to grow
a bit more. I don't see anything wrong with the nose (the Escaflowne characters;
noses were pretty long, though O.o) but yes, shrinking it down a bit might
help. Beautifully done. Ciao! ^^
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Arion Says: Whoah, Gnd.. Love the hair! That is hair I need to
learn. ^_^ I really like your work. Wonderfully done. I agree with you
about the nose but it's not bad either I mean, look at Escaflowne. Quite
similar actually. I love the tones you used and the blue is really nice.
I like the expression. I can't find much to come down on though I could
complement it quite heavily. I'm curious how you did some things. As far
as backgrounds.. They just take some playing with. It's not that hard
to pick up unless your doing real complicated things. You could jump from
the solid colors make use of shapes and gradients. Little designs. YoungWang
would probably have lots to offer in advice or examples for nice backgrounds.
Very nice detail as far as strands and cloth/skin tones go. He almost
looks like he's blushing ^_^ Sincerely well done.
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Maggie Bradshaw Says: Oh, my gosh, I can't belive I'm sopposed
to be critiquing this picture! O_o. I can say a million great things about
it, honestly. The skin coloring is amazing, and I love how you used like
pinks, roses, and like,, oranges to make such a realistc skin tone. The
only things I oculdnt possibly say about the pic that would be doing my
job are to agree with you in saying the nose is a bit long, and as a personal
preference, I don't much like the yellow for the background due to the
yeollow in the skin and the yellow/tan tunic...just too much overwhelming
yellow. I would suggest maybe a very light blue or reddish tone, or even
orange since the blue lining on the tunic stands out a lot and is very
striking (a cool and good thing ^_^) and orange is a contrasting color
to blue....but that just my two cents.Ja!! You're awsome!!
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Lorelai Says: Mwah!!! Oroooo~! Wow, what a picture! I think i posted
it on RPGamer, no? anyways, the hair is beautiful. I'm not sure how you
did it, but it resembles the way I do hair lately, which is with that
funky brush in photoshop + smudge....It's gorgeously soft. You're right
though, I think his nose is a wee bit long. Profiles are a lot harder
than they look, ne!!! Something about his look/facial expression seems...clueless...Good
for Fei, but bad if it was unintentional! His eyes are also a bit farther
back in the head for a profile, and his head is a bit narrow. (the brain
takes more space than that...) Also Fei has no adam's apple that I can
see...so unless ye are proving that Fei is indeed female...! Heehee!!!
Man, sorry I got ultra-picky on you! It's just that there wasn't much
to critique, it's such a good picture!!!
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