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REFF Critiquers:
Setsuna
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Legend of Zelda Fanart
Artwork by Dragon Princess
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Personal website: http://members.tripod.com/~Aeris_Strife_17/index-3.htm
Specialty in Art: people
Specialty in Medium: other
Self-estimated level:beginner
Artist's Comments: Okay, this is an older picture, it was a gift for a friend. I was kinda concentranting on shading, but her forehead looks to small. It's just Princess Zelda when she's grown up. I just wondered how I could improve the sideview and my shading.
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Setsuna Says:I'm not sure whether that light-colored part next to her crown
is her hair, or a type of hat (I haven't seen a picture of Zelda). If it's hair,
you should soften the hairline a bit, so that it's more obvious (add some wisps of
hair or break the bold line a bit with some strokes indicating the individual
strands of hair on the scalp) I don't think it's that the forehead is too small - I
think it's more that it seems to be protruding at an odd angle. From the brows up,
it's bulging outwards. You can correct this by just moving the line inwards, making
it a straighter line and flattening the forehead line a bit.
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