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REFF Critiquers:
Merle
Kitsune
Setsuna
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Fanart of Vampire Princess Miyu
Artwork by Yingster
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Personal website: http://www.redrival.com/yingster
Specialty in Art: computer graphics
Specialty in Medium: color pencils
Self-estimated level: beginner
Artist's Comments: I'd like to know how to improve my CGing skills using a mouse.
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Merle Says: Nice Miyu-sama! Very ethereal looking. I haven't had a chance
to see the new TV Miyu, but I watched the OAVs ages ago and thought they were cool,
though, a bit cryptic. =} I can't think of any real critiques for this pic.. it
looks nice the way it is, except for her hair.. there are some white patches in her
hair that seem off. Some of the shading in her outfit should be a different color
other than black, but it makes her look ethereal (like mentioned before) and I
think that's a good thing. =}
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Kitsune Says: Hoi Yingster~! This is a great mouse-CG of Miyu fanart~! Even
though the effect is a little "blurry" because of the mouse work, I think it fits
perfectly with the mood of the piece.. It feels like she's stepping through the
darkness in an ethereal glow. Very very nice. ^__^
As far as I know of, there isn't really an *easy* way to CG with a mouse. It take a
lot of time, a lot of patience, and a lot of self-control. ^_^;; People like Laine
may be able to give you some advice. She's gone a great number of CGs.. I think she
used in Photoshop the path tool.. she also works at a high resolution for better
results when shrunk down to size.
What you might want to consider for other CG projects is to up the contrast. Darken
the darks and lighten the lights. For this particular piece though, the ambiguity
of the light source adds to the mood. ^_^ Great work!!
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Setsuna Says: Wow! Very nice dark theme ... instant mood setting. Miyu has
a very ghostly look here that really fits in. Though you could very well get away
with what you have here, I'd recommend that you consider adding some small shiny
highlights for her hair to add some depth. Also, upping the contrast on her
clothing and skin (perhaps either adding some more dark shadow to heighten the
effect of the background, or adding more white in highlight areas to make her seem
to 'glow') will help you achieve a more polished look.
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