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REFF Critiquers:
 Merle
Ryuuzaki
Laine
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Original Artwork
Artwork by TCDD
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Personal website: www.geocities.com/windterritory
Specialty in Art: human figures
Specialty in Medium: marker / pen
Self-estimated level: intermediate
Artist's Comments: This is my basic girls' anatomy... (oh don't laugh...) I think it can be improved... please help make some suggestions. +_+ (the pic is a little dirty, sorry.)
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 Merle Says: They're very cute! I don't seem anything outstanding bad with them at ALL! =} The one on the right seems to be missing an arm though..... or it's hard to tell where it's gone. The shading on the picture is very nice.. but once again, I think the one on right has an oddly shaped chest. =^^; Especially the direction she's standing in relation to her neck and the direction her head is facing. Her spine seems to be both on the left side of her body and her right side of her body, not down the center of it =}
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Ryuuzakie Says: Dahh, there's nothing horrible bout this!! >b I think it's pretty much ok...what Merle said about the girl on the left is true, but it's only visible if you've taken extensive courses in anatomy or stare at it for a really long time. =b At first glance you wouldn't even notice it. I'm guessing you left the arm out just cuz it saved a bit of drawing. =) However, since you've pretty much got the feel of the majority of the body, I'd like to see how you'd fare with lower legs and hands. :D You don't see much of those in the picture, so it's time to get working with those. ^^ You might also want to try some harder poses, especially ones with a lot of action or foreshortening. Foreshortening is hard. @_@
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Laine Says: ooh cutey ! i esp like the pattern on the shirt of the short haired girl =D
nitpick mode > there isnt anything visibly wrong with the pic , except the pigtailed girl . She looks...different . I .....sense it ! O_O;;;; Her eyes seem unbalanced for one , the one on the side of the short haired girl is a wee bit higher than the other one but no biggie there ! One way to overcome problems like these is to flip pictures over when drawing them to spot any unbalanced stuff ^^
Like said , the girl's chest seems rathr weird too o.o; i think it's just me but her hips look a tiny bit small but that's just your style methinks =D
As said , her arm seems to be going nowhere too...and hm..what's happening to her pigtails ? o.o they seem to ...disappear for a while at her collarbones ?
i think your sense of anatomy is good though , the short haired girl looks pretty pro like she just came out of a manga book =D
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